As Lavo takes the penalty, it was raining heavily as he could feel the pressure burning through his skin. His heart pounded faster as the crowd cheered louder. Lavo took a deep breath and kicked the ball with all his might and the crowd could not believe their eyes… This soccer game was legendary.
I think that it could of been better What I mean by that it need to be longer
Ok thanks. I will try to make my other blogs longer.